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Who Am I

who am i does anyone know who am i does anyone care i know lots of people but i have no real friends i chat, laugh and sympathize- but it's all pretend when left alone with moments to ponder i look inside and try hard to find the real me my essence the me left behind i'm ashamed to admit i'm ashamed to say the real me is buried deeply packed away i waited too long to unpack myself that myself is long gone and i'm just a mess

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Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 8:21:00 AM

TERRIN, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2016 10:50:00 AM

Terri, nice to see this one again. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/29/2014 4:26:00 PM

Hi Terri,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/29/2014 9:40:00 AM

I know exactly how you fell, Terri, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2014 8:49:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Terri - I choose your first good written poem - Well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/28/2014 6:08:00 PM

Hi Terri, this is such a deep powerful write and it reminds me of one of mine called "Do you know me?" which is along the same lines. You may want to take a peek at it. I wish you a warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings. Pandita

Terri Davidson
Date: 8/28/2014 6:14:00 PM

thank you for your kind words. i will definitely check your poem out. i'll respond in kind after i read it.