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Who Am I

The clouds are heavy, cant hold for long, tired of providing the shade all along, tired of doing everything for a reason, tired of wearing faces for every season, tired of pretending to enjoy the fun, tired of being always on the run, tired of overlooking other's sin, tired of being a cause for their win, tired of worrying of what she might say, tired of being the pavement of her way, tired of acting foolish,of being a buffoon, tired of being someone else's cushion, tired of being a mother to someone, tired of caring for the happiness of everyone, tired of leading the multidimensional life, tired of being the person I am not, the clouds are heavy, cant hold for long, saturated, exhausted, its time to fall, and clear the sky, so that the sun may shine, help discover myself - Who am I?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/15/2011 3:19:00 PM
It's a mad mad world, Anusheel. I'll give you the advice someone gave me once. Don't think about it. Just get busy doing something. I'm kidding, of course. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Anusheel. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 10:13:00 AM
Welcome to poetrysoup :) I find myself constantly asking myself the same question, along with, who do I want to be? I think it's a continuous journey to self discovery and introspection is the only way to go. I hope to see more of your work :)
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Anusheel Pandey
Date: 6/28/2011 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 6/21/2011 3:41:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your interesting poetry tonight.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Anusheel Pandey
Date: 6/25/2011 11:34:00 PM
thanks Linda.
Date: 6/21/2011 12:26:00 PM
I like the riddle format of your piece. It makes me wonder if your the thunderstorm, or the brilliant rainbow that follows. Dynamic piece. Write on!
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Anusheel Pandey
Date: 6/21/2011 2:38:00 PM
Thanks a lot Bethlehem. Your comment really made my day. Just the way, I wanted it to project.
Date: 6/21/2011 4:13:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Anusheel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Anusheel Pandey
Date: 6/21/2011 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Carol.
Date: 6/21/2011 3:19:00 AM
Good poem I feel that way also. Get some rest
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Anusheel Pandey
Date: 6/21/2011 2:41:00 PM
Really appreciate your comments. I wrote this when I was somewhat stressed out, but not now.

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