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Who am I?

Who am I? 

Who am I,
Does anybody know?
Do I hit every bump, or go with that flow?

Do I really like this,
If I’m more into that?
Can I say that im lost,
If I know where I’m at?

Should I say that it’s black,
When I know that it’s white?
Or risk everything I have,
To say what is right

Should I cry in the dark,
And keep it to myself?
Or do I reach out to someone,
And get some help?

Do I say that I love you,
When I don’t really do?
Or move onto him,
And completely forget you?

Do I know who I am,
And know what to do?
If I said that I did,
It would be untrue

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  1. Date: 8/3/2010 5:33:00 PM
    Wow excellent poem. Welcome to the soup

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 4:15:00 PM
    WOW! are you me in another country? amazing stuff

  1. Date: 7/30/2010 3:06:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup ... so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 8:48:00 PM
    SHELBY , Welcome to this site ! On top of the entrance of the Oracle at Delphi in Greece was written "KNOW THYSELF" ! By asking 'Who am I ?" , you have commenced the search in the right direction ! -RAJ

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 4:43:00 PM
    Welcome to the soup. good poem look forward to reading the others

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 3:46:00 PM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shelby. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol