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Who? Where did I go before I knew you; Where was my refuge when I couldn’t face the world, when my mask slipped and I was exposed in all my vulnerability; Who comforted me; Who lifted me up when I lay on my face defeated; Who took the tumbled pieces of my shattered mind and laid them straight again; Who cared when I was hurt and loosened the bands that threatened to crush me; Who listened to me and made allowances for the times I said things I later regretted; Who forgave me those things before I even asked, and said “I knew you didn’t mean it the way it sounded;” Who did all those things; and when you’re gone where will I go? Jan 1978

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Date: 8/8/2017 3:16:00 PM
The moment you cherish and indispensable personality. Intriguing!
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/16/2017 2:24:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting. And I'm so glad for your nice words. Beverly Read
Date: 8/8/2017 8:58:00 AM
Interesting. When I insert myself into this poem it makes me want to say. LIFE IS GREAT FANTASTIC INCREDIBLE AND AT TIMES UNBELIEVABLE.
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/16/2017 2:22:00 PM
So glad you read this and got such a feeling. Poetry is meant to evoke feelings and I'm glad this one did for you. Beverly Read
Date: 8/7/2017 2:48:00 PM
Absorb the love in both days good or bad. You will be forgiven if your heart is pure. I speak as one who has been married many many many years.
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/16/2017 2:21:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting. Sounds like you've had a lot of experience. Beverly Read
Date: 8/23/2016 9:12:00 AM
I can relate, as often as we wonder who and why people are in our lives and how hard it would be without them. Good questions and thoughts are laced in your words.
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/23/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments.
Date: 8/23/2016 3:13:00 AM
Beautifully framed sentiments, Beverly! You are blessed to have such a person in your life. My best regards. :) john P.s A seven for love.
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Beverly Read
Date: 8/23/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thank you John. Such people are rare I know. Hope you have or have had someone like that in your life too.

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