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A Friend's pride in his antique Chevy, restored to its original beauty.

With pride swelling deep inside I take you out for a ride Tooling all around our town Watching heads pivot around Shining white as virginal snow Purring like a kitten below I'm deliberately driving slow For I want everyone to know You are my pride, my greatest joy A dream cherished as a boy Unmarked by the slightest blemish You've fulfilled my every wish You take me back to a gentle time Where treasured memories are mine You're adorned with gleaming chrome All eyes follow as we head home Though it came a little late I own a pristine fifty-eight For weeks I labored hot and heavy The reward - my beautiful Chevy

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Date: 11/25/2014 2:44:00 PM
woo hoo I enjoyed this poem. I have a hot rod 79 el camino try working el camino into a poem ,lol the day will come. well expressed and written a 7up from me
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Date: 11/26/2014 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert. I will put that on my "to do" list. Nothing I enjoy more than a challenge. Let me know what color it is.

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