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White Tears

crying white tears sky leaning on chimneypots… thermals ready

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 2:17:00 AM

Seren, well expressed. Enjoyed stopping by **SKAT**

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2013 2:53:00 PM

Hi Seren..I got a soup mail I think was supposed to go to Craig cause it was about de DUM de DUM which I assume is meter talk :)...so..you need Craig hon..unless you want help dum de dumming? Light & Love

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/17/2013 6:48:00 PM

No was just saying that i was useless at dum de dumming. Lol i was talking to u

David Williams

Date: 1/17/2013 9:47:00 AM

Seren teriffic image, but very cold outside here...yep very modern...David

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/17/2013 9:54:00 AM

Hi David its actually warmer here today, think tomorrow will be action stations...Seren

Kash Poet

Date: 1/17/2013 6:35:00 AM

Good one!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/17/2013 9:54:00 AM

thanks Kash

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/17/2013 4:44:00 AM

this is precisely the sort of haiku I like to see, full of stunning images which paint a vivid picture in the mind...the haiku fanatics will tell you that it is wrong because it contains imagery and is subjective, but to me it is a great example of haiku for the modern age :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/17/2013 9:57:00 AM

to be honest Charlotte, I wouldnt know if it was modern or no.If I like it that's ok by me. i am all for earning through other peoples comments.. Seren

Seren Roberts
Date: 1/17/2013 9:57:00 AM

typo learning ....