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White Summer Dress

Four hundred from here one month today On a bench one thousand songs played At the ferris wheel of Centeroo I sat that day and waited for you Among the haze of faces and sun I guessed That you were the girl in the white summer dress Having a laugh as you searched for me Began to wonder what today would bring But across the fence the moment was lost I took to find how much pizza would cost Now nine hundred from you this very day I'm writing you on this chair to say That I can't wait to leave this place Fly to you just to see your face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/18/2011 10:42:00 PM
very lovely poem Zach...i enjoyed reading it..smiles..chiquita
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Date: 8/27/2011 10:28:00 PM
Creative and nice expressions, Zach
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Zach Sarver
Date: 8/31/2011 8:14:00 AM
thanks!
Date: 8/27/2011 7:50:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Zach. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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