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White Snow

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sdu9M3CNJ4M White snow begins to settle round the coffee shop as we sip our cafe the Christmas lights twinkle in the evening as a cadence of beauty falls in amber shades aglow, kissing quadrant windows perfect view bright shiny mirrors in our eyes, we are staring into each others souls... Wreaths of green with silver baubles frame the wooden entrance door street lamps are smiling at the halos of our shadowy coupling silhouettes The aromatic scent of coffee bean and vanilla essence reaches our nose sweetly wrapping us in festive shawls our mood rejoices, oh love, oh love, Dance with me to the end of this dream for I believe your are my music hold my hands across this sturdy table, let me feel your bodily warmth Peppermint kisses and wooly eyes that see only the gaze of each other as the snow falls gently twirling all around us at the cafe, we talk softly Like lovers of old in a realm of new, the weather is so cozy and charming we huddle closer to each other as the fireplace invites us to its hearth we choose to stay little longer as the white snow settles all around us the snowman outside grins a silly grin and says " heh, I know those two"

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Date: 12/19/2021 4:18:00 AM
Atmospheric seasonal write, lovely...Delice
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Date: 12/18/2021 1:13:00 PM
A Christmas romantic. Love the story ~ Debra
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Date: 12/18/2021 10:05:00 AM
What a great romantic story you wrote. My daughter has a fireplace, so I know what to feel if two lovers huddle closely near the hearth. Happy yuletide greetings.
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Date: 12/18/2021 11:32:00 AM
Fireplace bring great memories dear Victor, thanks for stopping in, praying for warmth this time of year :)
Date: 12/18/2021 10:03:00 AM
Facemasks do make a difference, don't they?
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Date: 12/18/2021 11:32:00 AM
Yes they do Rico, I can't wait to see the smiles on those I love, without the masks,
Date: 12/17/2021 8:55:00 PM
Amazingly beautiful ambiance and a pair of lovers walking slowly to the fireplace, with their body and souls entwined ! Lovely write Rose
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/18/2021 11:33:00 AM
Thank you dear Valsa. Entwined in love, we get closer to the Divine, grateful for your comment dear poet.
Date: 12/17/2021 4:06:00 PM
An incredibly fine write with images that stick as surely as the snow you mention falling while you and your partner "gaze at each other at the cafe." Lovely job, Mystic Rose Rose. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the flow of your lines.
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Date: 12/18/2021 11:33:00 AM
Thank you dear Milton, may life always bring you the magic you need and desire, have a great day :)

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