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White Silence

Winter coats proliferate, the earth is stilled by snowflakes slowly drifting, swirling, shifting, sifting down, a whirling, curling cloud of white confetti. ****** ...an exercise in assonance and alliteration.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/4/2016 4:02:00 AM
What a beautiful visual you have created with this verse, Keith.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/4/2016 4:41:00 AM
Thanks Elaine!
Date: 2/3/2016 9:09:00 PM
I really like it, Keith!! And the alliteration and assonance come through quite well.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/4/2016 4:42:00 AM
Thanks Andrea... this was a fun one to write! Best wishes, Keith

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