White Rose

You are the fairest within the heart beauty Mirror, mirror Amazingly gorgeous White rose Most beautiful satin soft petals Falling from the heart outwards, crown on heavenly beauty Sweetest aroma drifting on air Upon scent Prettiest of all flowers In thorns played the part Deep inside Invites from colour The softest kiss Upon light of day Mirror ,mirror Caressed so sweetly in the rising sun upon morning dew Beautiful you

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 8/31/2013 4:56:00 AM

A lovely combination of words Liam. It sounds romantic my friend.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/31/2013 6:19:00 AM

every dream that is beautiful is romantic wonderful comment my friend thank you deeply appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/31/2013 4:40:00 AM

- Thank you for your beautiful poem, Liam - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/31/2013 6:18:00 AM

thank you anne lise you have a blessed beautiful weekend beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/30/2013 8:55:00 PM

and tnks for reading my lavender poem

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/31/2013 3:25:00 AM

IT WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL NOW I ADD MY FACE ON LINE THE DARKHORSE APPEARS THANK YOU KINDLY

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/30/2013 8:53:00 PM

So enchanting and beautiful this poem is..A white rose is rare and beautiful indeed..Going to my favs..: ) Charma!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/31/2013 3:28:00 AM

THANK YOU DEEPLY FOR YOUR BEAUTIFUL WORDS HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/30/2013 7:31:00 PM

Hi Liam, Nicely crafted romantic write my friend.. Ken

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/31/2013 3:30:00 AM

THANK YOU KEN FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT MY FRIEND DEEPLY APPRECIATED