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White Pain

White is not an opaque color It seemed to shimmer incandescent figures under the eve of light A foreshadowing Pain is the white that compliments your wedding dress Tying the knot Knowing you’ll be bound to it forever Pain can be held and walked hand in hand down the aisle with Your maid of honor White It’s the color that infests your eyes and hair and face Starting with empty thoughts and eraser shavings caught in the bouquet Making your solid black outlines a mere grey White may not be opaque But you succumb to the transparency While the pain fills the void your tears left Pain loves to linger Because it’s no stranger it feels like it belongs Pain is loyal It never forgets to white out all the right dates and remember to walk you home. Don’t let Pain overstay its welcome It’ll burrow a home into your head and kick out Calm and Cool It’ll bond with Hate behind your back But it’s not like that’s unknown What a horribly manipulative thing Pain is But without it in your life What is home?

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Date: 5/3/2016 10:00:00 PM
Jess, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:55:00 PM
Hi Jess, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.......with love.
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Date: 4/30/2016 4:37:00 PM
Jess Kim,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/30/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thank you! I think your poems are very well written.

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