Get Your Premium Membership

White Noise

concrete is solid and glass is clear and who among you will argue with that? you work at a job and so does he burning dough and fat you sleep at night in a regular bed a fluffy pillow under your head --and it’s endless— --and it’s endless— --and it’s endless— --and it’s endless— --and it’s endless— --and it’s endless— white noise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/15/2013 12:39:00 AM
I really like this one. the way you kept repeating that one line to show how endless it all is!! My friend Sandy said you were a good poet here. I think she is right!
Login to Reply
Roth Avatar
Alex Roth
Date: 11/15/2013 11:30:00 PM
Thanks. I almost didn't post this one because I didn't think it was good enough. Thanks for the positive encouragement.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things