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White Line of Clouds

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White Line of Clouds

The sky tears into a white line of clouds The Earth below stays seemingly stagnant Up, the show increases along the way The sky shatters into many colors All seems to be divided by the clouds Jettisoned out like a rash lightning bolt Colors are traversing from light to dark Quickly the night reels in, taking over Darkness fills the sky, clouds aren’t visible Rift still exists but only seen in light The vibrancy of clouds will come again The dawn shows a grand display, untainted And the color score will come back to play With tear in place anything can happen
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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 12:12:00 PM
    Such wonderful imagery! I love 'the vibrancy of clouds' and 'the sky shatters into many colors.' A superb piece my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:45:00 PM
    wonderful imagery you did, russell!! I sure like this one.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 11:45:00 PM
    and thanks for the kind words!

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 10:14:00 PM
    Great description of the changing moods of sunrise and how worth the wait. All your dreams come true.

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 5:10:00 PM
    Excellent poem Russell, can you tell me what is the difference between blank verse and free verse, I'm a bit confused. xx

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Yes it can. You painted a beautiful picture. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/21/2013 3:26:00 PM
    Hello Russell, a well done image.. deep, like my mind...yet I find the lining of clouds waiting on tears very beautiful.... always~LINDA