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White Lies - 23 Dec 2013

naked trees on ice - silently the night has sown a field of white lies

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Date: 12/28/2013 12:58:00 AM
my gosh, this is awesome!! some say that the traditional syllable count and use of symbolism for haiku is not a good thing to have, but I sure do LOVE this one.
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Michael Dom
Date: 12/28/2013 7:28:00 AM
Sometimes traditions are good, especially when its a learning curve. Thanks for your high praise Andrea.
Date: 12/27/2013 11:57:00 PM
Amazing, great write!
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Michael Dom
Date: 12/28/2013 7:25:00 AM
Thanks for your visit Arthur. Vaso - I had a school mate by that name.

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