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White Knuckle Ride- Sentinel

the wind whips the waves into a raging screen hiding the light from the ships in trouble those rocks are there yet not a warning seen soon ships can turn into wooden rubble troubled captain shouts keep a watchful eye lifeboats at ready to brace the bad storm hearts are beating fast no one wants to die long for a bed that is both snug and warm the boat is tossed on a wave to lighthouse height everyone hanging on in sheer terror the lighthouse lamp is just a flicker throws light white knuckle ride seems to last forever penned 10/3/2016

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Date: 4/26/2016 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations Seren.... linda
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Date: 4/15/2016 11:56:00 AM
Excellent poem my lovely friend it's. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/14/2016 7:26:00 PM
this is fantastic imagery. I agree with Teppo. Glad I finally saw it by looking at the winner list. Congrats, Seren.
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Date: 4/10/2016 5:09:00 AM
Beautiful quatrain Seren you paint a vivid story in just 3 stanzas - Living on a tiny Island I can relate to this so much - thank goodness for the RLNI! :-) hugs Jan xx
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