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White Ice

Great stomps across the frozen lake ice six feet under Great cracks and ice thunder as we sped over bubbles, white mystery under some trees bent under recent ice some fires burnt hot heads up hair back, we threw our hats and sacrificed to the winter wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/9/2015 4:25:00 PM
Ellen, this is a uniquely interesting description of winter on the lakes. some great visuals. Loved the last three lines especially.
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Ellen Browne
Date: 2/13/2015 3:57:00 PM
thank you. Bringing back memories skating on the huge lakes in New York State with my family

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