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White Dragon

He was chasing the white dragon as he sat puffing on his hubby bubbly soon he was afloat in a world of dreams not a care in the world for his family who would, again, go hungry this night He sat squandering his and their lives carried of into obliquity by the heroin his two daughters crying with hunger still he puffed on, lost, lost to them all consumed by the white fiery dragon An addict to the power of the drugs forever lost to their grasping clutch written 08/07/2013

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/14/2013 7:24:00 PM

very well written Shadow,,,, is this someone you know,,, I knew a heroin addict once..... someone explained to me that's what he was on. When I ask what is he on. I was 18 at that time ;}

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/15/2013 3:54:00 AM

hi Debbie yes I knew several over the years all sad cases most now dead, what a waste. ty for reading Shadow x smiles

Sandra Ramacher

Date: 8/14/2013 5:52:00 AM

Hi Shadow, Firstly, thank you for your comments on my verse. I admire your writing, seemingly simple yet poignant. Addiction is a little like pulling leaves of a daisy, until you are left with only one leaf left to pull. Sandra Monica

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/14/2013 6:09:00 AM

yes a good description. Sandra wonderful how you related it to a daisy Ty for reading and enjoying Shadow x smiles

Kathryn Collins

Date: 8/8/2013 8:58:00 AM

Shadow How hard-hitting the devastation you describe so uniquely. Perhaps one of the saddest things in the world. Innocent children in the (so-called) care addicted parents. Thanks for reading my poem. Kathy

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/8/2013 9:16:00 AM

Ty Kathy too common these days unfortunately nice of you to read shadow x smiles

Milton Toran

Date: 8/8/2013 7:36:00 AM

Powerfully detailed and real. Every word is true. Well-written!...Milt

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/8/2013 8:00:00 AM

hi Milt Ty drugs just lead to involuntary suicide nice of you to read Shadow x smiles

Donna Jones

Date: 8/7/2013 4:27:00 PM

Could feel the emotion in this one Shadow...very well done

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/7/2013 4:54:00 PM

hi Donna its sad the grief drugs cause both to user and family. Ty for reading shadow x smiles

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/7/2013 9:30:00 AM

WOW! This is so sad, Shadow...I could just picture his two daughters crying for food....Moving write. Thanks for bringing this to light!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/7/2013 10:15:00 AM

Happens far too often Eileen ty Shadow x smiles