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White Darkness

White Darkness Here is a world where time stands still And days are countless, years unreal. Here is a world of snow and whiteness Where nothing grows and things are forever. I look upon a thick white sheet That neither thickens or thins away. The air is cold, yet it does not freeze Ice won’t melt or carry over. Walk as I may the blanket, no way is clear The white world is round like your own. Yet is has no seasons or reason to change No escape I know of for now. So things are dark and things are bright Who said to be blind was sight dimmed? The whiteness of a world like this Leaves me breathless, still and done for.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/29/2012 6:24:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mari. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/25/2012 4:38:00 PM
beautiful nature, beautiful story poem. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hug!Erich
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Mari Begonia Cinco
Date: 11/25/2012 7:10:00 PM
Thank you very much! I've read your poetry, too, and I just find it beautiful.

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