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I wrote this Friday, August 24, 2012 in several parts..One early morning then on the road to Tifton to see about Cody and third on the way back from Tifton..At one time cotton was picked by hand by whomever the farmer could get to pick that day..The first bale usually helped get the children's clothes and supplies for back to school if possible..Now it is allowed to all open then spray it with defoliant and picked by a machine called a cotton picker..Sara
Cool dampness covers like surround Sound coming from modern Stereo, even rooster's voices Float steady at every turn In the planter on the porch rail Blue Bachelor Buttons Finally bloom, not knowing If live just one season The sun comes on up gold clear light Like the famous lightbulb Soon the dampness will dissipate Day will warm , birds eat grubs On the road white tail deer appear Panic flash their white up Run like the mischief into woods Full of fear they breakup One goes to the left and one right Drop their tails disappear Safe in the woods surrounded now Mom seeks fawn_ perseveres Now see fields of cotton ripening Opening their white bolls Years ago that would be first pickin' Money for a few school clothes Click on "About This Poem"

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Date: 9/21/2012 9:28:00 AM
Dear Sara, It was "Plutarch 46-120 AD that wrote "Painting is silent Poetry but Poetry is painting that speaks" as it is with your living words. Fondest Regards.
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Date: 8/30/2012 11:14:00 AM
Great poem, I had never seen cotton until I traveled down south several years ago. You paint a lovely picture. Lee
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:59:00 PM
cotton, I meant, lol
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Date: 8/26/2012 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful descriptive write. I've heard the saying 'cotting-picking fingers' - interesting notes too, my friend.
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Date: 8/25/2012 5:56:00 PM
enjoyed reading you this evening. Cindy
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Date: 8/25/2012 5:15:00 PM
I remember the cotton and the long sacks they collected it in.
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Date: 8/25/2012 4:49:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write my friend! I truly love the descriptions you have of the start of day, with the dampness and coolness, very elaborate and beautiful! I really liked the deer images you painted for us to visualize, wonderful! This is an awesome piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/25/2012 2:15:00 PM
great write Sara,cotton picking princess
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Date: 8/25/2012 11:09:00 AM
fascinating journey Sara.. much has changed in the way cotton is handled now.. machines do all the work laborers once toiled.. an impressive piece gathering old and new together.. enjoyed ..luv..
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