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I'm dreaming of you this Christmas, And the ones of yesteryears, When the snow was falling, And we were kissing, And I had no need for tears. I'm dreaming of you this Christmas, With every decoration I hang, Dreaming of the carols we sang, At our wedding when bells rang. I'm dreaming of you this Christmas, And the ones of yesteryears, When the snow was falling, And we were kissing, And I had no need for tears. I'm dreaming of you this Christmas, With every decoration I hang, Dreaming of the carols we sang, At our wedding when bells rang. ____________________________ November 29, 2015 Rhyme Inspired by the song, White Christmas For the contest, Christmas Carols, sponsor, Kelly Deschler Second Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/7/2016 11:06:00 PM

BROKEN, Congrats on your Christmas win. ~LINDA~

Constance La France
Date: 1/7/2016 11:31:00 PM

Linda, thanks for the congrats ~

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/5/2016 8:24:00 AM

This is bittersweet and lovely. Congratulations on your win. Janice

Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 12:41:00 AM

Janice, thanks for the lovely and the congratulations !

Dan Cwiak

Date: 1/4/2016 4:51:00 PM

Nicely done, B W. That is the way to start the New Year, with a winner. Congratulations and Happy New Year to you!

Constance La France
Date: 1/5/2016 2:15:00 AM

Dan, thanks for visiting my poem with that nice comment and the congratulations and happy new year to you also...

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 10:42:00 AM

Broken, congrats on your Christmas Carol. SKAT :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 1:03:00 PM

Thank you Skat

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/3/2016 4:24:00 PM

Broken, great job, congrats!

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:32:00 AM

Edward, thanks for the great and the congrats !

Jan Allison

Date: 1/3/2016 3:58:00 PM

A delightful poem congrats on your win Broken Wings :-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:32:00 AM

Jan, thanks for the delightful and the congrats !

Eve Roper

Date: 1/3/2016 3:23:00 PM

Broken Wing, I really enjoyed your wonderful poem : ) beautifully written! Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:33:00 AM

Eve, thanks for the wonderful the beautifully and the congratulations !

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/3/2016 1:49:00 PM

I liked your more romantic interpretation of the song, White Christmas... Beautifully written and rhymed... Congrats on a win!

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:34:00 AM

Kelly, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am very honored ~

Lu Loo

Date: 1/3/2016 1:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win Broken Wings! I love the gentle flow you seem to always carry...*smiles* *congrats* -Luloo :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/4/2016 9:35:00 AM

Laura, thanks for the congrats, the love and the smiles !

James Inman

Date: 12/3/2015 9:15:00 AM

Interesting BW. While I was reading your poem I thought to myself how the flow reminded me of Bing Crosby singing White Christmas. Nicely done.

Constance La France
Date: 12/3/2015 3:04:00 PM

James, thanks for the visit, well that's a good thing it reminds you of Bing and White Christmas, because that is what it is suppose to mimic.. lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2015 6:24:00 PM

also melancholy. I love that in a good Christmas poem

Constance La France
Date: 12/2/2015 9:10:00 PM

I was surprised to find that White Christmas is just two verse repeated, it seemed to be so much more

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2015 6:23:00 PM

very inspired by that song, Constance. You are full of the Christmas spirit here!!

Constance La France
Date: 12/2/2015 9:09:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for visiting, oh yes this year I have to spirit for sure~

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/2/2015 4:41:00 PM

BW, this is such a sad and beautiful piece. You captured the essence of the song really well. Great job! Best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis7

Constance La France
Date: 12/2/2015 9:11:00 PM

Alexis, thanks for that nice comment and for the 7!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/2/2015 4:02:00 PM

Again, Broken Wings, so sad, but so lovely in the way you image your emotions to touch our hearts. All the best for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 12/2/2015 4:29:00 PM

Sandra thanks for the lovely visit and the 7!

Cona Adams

Date: 12/1/2015 8:36:00 AM

So sad when marriage ends. This is a lovely poem. Good luck in the contest! It's a seven for me.

Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2015 12:40:00 PM

Cona, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate

Thomas Martin

Date: 11/30/2015 6:45:00 PM

Beautiful, Constance!! Lovely as the coming Christmas.

Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2015 12:41:00 PM

Thomas, thanks for visiting. I find Christmas a sad time of the year

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/30/2015 2:28:00 AM

BW, lovely lines.. ~OLive Eloisa =`)

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2015 9:34:00 AM

Olive, thanks for the lovely ~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2015 9:31:00 PM

Beautiful!

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2015 9:35:00 AM

Richard, I love the word beautiful ~

Lu Loo

Date: 11/29/2015 8:36:00 PM

Perfect for the contest!! gl!! *smiles*

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2015 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Laura