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White Candles of the Last Love

Leaves of trees so tired for a summer is writhing rusting . Chestnuts are blossoming again, trusted in luxury of heat. believed in madness of the weather, they are opening in the autumn, as sign of the last tired love and... are scorching completely. White candles! the trees as if compose a fire by naked branches, and petal by petal - the former hopes are descending in the Oblivion. Carelessly, Without sense, Without a seed ... there is the sentence of the last love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/19/2008 7:14:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Hope you will continue with your writing and that you share it with the world. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2008 10:44:00 AM
Wow! This is a wonderful poem with good use of imagery. Visually interesting too. Enjoyed reading this one. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/5/2008 3:49:00 PM
Nicely done,great write.A poetry friend always,Charlie
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