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White Blushing Bun

white milky moon bloom dazzles eyes of peace questers oozes odium August 23, 2020 Note:Haiku - Color With Alliteration Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchen.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2020 5:46:00 PM

You are going to laugh, Deepa: When I read this the first time, I read this: ... 'oozes opium'... How about that?! :) gw

V. Deepa
Date: 8/28/2020 3:01:00 AM

Lol, oozes opium~I really had a good laugh dear Gershon sir:-D:-) Your first glimpse at my Muse made me smile:-) Thankyou for the kind visit and humour filled compliment:-) Have a great day.Take care~Deepa

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2020 3:43:00 PM

alliteration AND assonance. NICE!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 2:45:00 AM

Thankyou dear Andrea mam for the kind compliment.:-) Have a great day.Much love:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/25/2020 8:24:00 AM

Lovely haiku!

V. Deepa
Date: 8/27/2020 2:44:00 AM

Thankyou dear Vijay sir:-) Glad you liked my Haiku.Take care. Have a lovely day..:-)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/23/2020 11:48:00 AM

Hello Deepa, i like the full moon. moon has a brightness. I see a face in the full moon. the full moon has stars shining brightly. Much love Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 8/25/2020 6:47:00 AM

Yes , Darlene mam.. I love the moon too.Sometimes feel peaceful while gazing at it.:-) I am tied up with lot of works here..not finding time to login. Will SP mail you soon.Take care. Much love:-)