White Beach

Ocean breeze blows so fresh and pure While white clouds sail away in departure Azure sky reveals its majestic mirror of beauty As choral-remains and shells stud ashore in bounty Sand coated the coast almost as white as snow Children play at sand dunes climbing in a row Sea birds are paragliding gracefully In rhythms of waves rolling with glee Emerald water sparkles like diamonds Seagulls swoop for fish leaving kiss quite fond Crabs and turtles waltz with the ebbs Joys and excitements come floating in blebs Some dolphins swim in an aquatic rollercoaster To entertain me and you and every beach lover Oh, what a great time to sojourn in this white beach! Come, savor its charm so therapeutically rich. May 10, 2023 11.53am Couplet Poetry Contest Judged: 5/16/2023 11:28:00 AM Sponsored by: Sotto Poet Place 2 (up to multi-3 and multi-HM w)

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2023 10:52:00 AM

- Namagyan Beach ... a place I can dream of, Leonora ... back with a congratulations :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 5/19/2023 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet freind Anne-Lise. Heartfelt congratulations as well for your win! Blessings to you always.Hugs...hugs...

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 5/18/2023 9:04:00 AM

I want to go to the white beach to ease my mind from stress..looking all the things you creatively written. I am always your fan when it comes on writing poems my dear friend. Congratulations!! Take care always and God bless ;)

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/17/2023 12:03:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.

Len Gasun
Date: 5/17/2023 6:42:00 PM

Thank you so much. Welcome God bless you too my dear sis in faith Beata. hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/16/2023 10:17:00 PM

Hi Len, I echo what Suzette said. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great evening;-) Alexis

Len Gasun
Date: 5/17/2023 6:41:00 PM

Thank you so much. Likewise dear Alexis Y. Hugs

Suzette Richards

Date: 5/16/2023 3:30:00 AM

It makes me long for the beach and the carefree atmosphere associated with it. I enjoyed this, Len. Regards, Suzette

Len Gasun
Date: 5/16/2023 4:15:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comment my dear poet friend Su. May God bless you always and your writings. I'll visit your page sooo soon. Hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/11/2023 5:24:00 AM

Great day at the beach, Len:) enjoyed this poem:)

Len Gasun
Date: 5/11/2023 3:38:00 PM

You're right, my dear poet friend Jo. This poem was also written with the inspiration of our white beach here, just a walking distance from home now becoming one of the popular tourists' spots. Its called Namagyan Beach, the word namagyan means relatives or blood related. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for reading it and your uplifting words. God bless you always. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2023 7:50:00 AM

- Sounds like a perfect summer day... beautiful colors... lovely sounds... it's just to enjoy, Leonora :) - Best wishes :) - hugs

Len Gasun
Date: 5/11/2023 3:37:00 PM

You're right, my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. This poem was also written with the inspiration of our white beach here, just a walking distance from home now becoming one of the popular tourists' spots. Its called Namagyan Beach, the word namagyan means relatives or blood related. Thanks for reading my poem, your uplifting words and warm wishes. All the best in your life and writing endeavors too. God bless you always. Hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/10/2023 5:24:00 AM

Sounds like a wonderful day at the beach, Len. Good luck!

Len Gasun
Date: 5/11/2023 3:35:00 PM

You're right, my dear poet friend Daniel. This poem was also written with the inspiration of our white beach here, just a walking distance from home now becoming one of the popular tourists' spots. Its called Namagyan Beach, the word namagyan means relatives or blood related. Thanks for reading my poem, your uplifting words and warm wishes. All the best in your life and writing endeavors too. God bless you always. Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2023 12:38:00 AM

I love the seaside attractions. Your poem is so well written.

Len Gasun
Date: 5/11/2023 3:30:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Vic. Blessings to you always. Hugs