White

Don't worry about oblivion You are all the colors in one You may not get all the attention Don't worry about oblivion Of complex categorization In arts, you're a color my hun Don't worry about oblivion You are all the colors in one

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 12:49:00 AM

Hansteven, Congratulations in the SKAT contest. LINDA

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/31/2016 10:36:00 AM

Great Poem . Congrats. Anisha D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/28/2016 11:47:00 PM

Congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Hansteven!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/28/2016 1:06:00 PM

Very nice! Congratulations on your fine win, Hansteven! Sandra

Sharon Gulley

Date: 1/28/2016 11:24:00 AM

Hansteven, Congratulations on your Win in Skat's colorful contest. What a lovely write and read. A sweet and inspirational write my pen friend.....Sharon : ) Enjoyed!

Skat A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:52:00 AM

Hansteven, Congratulations on your awesome colored win. Drop by my blog " Character Sketch" if ya like. LOVE ** SKAT **

Paul Callus

Date: 1/26/2016 4:36:00 PM

Cleverly written, HS. And yet there are so many shades of white...! ~ Regards // paul

Funom Makama

Date: 1/25/2016 12:57:00 PM

My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share.

Hansteven Selfa
Date: 1/26/2016 9:01:00 AM

Thank You :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2016 5:59:00 PM

haha, this seems to go along with my own color poem talking about how I am white in the personality test! LOVE it.

Hansteven Selfa
Date: 1/26/2016 9:01:00 AM

Thank You :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/17/2016 11:27:00 AM

Based on physics. Yes, light is so interesting. The thing that gets me is that we only have color receptors for green, blue and red. So what is yellow really? (and magenta and cyan). But I find yellow to be the most mysterious of all. Magenta and cyan make sense. Yellow seems to me to be so peculiar because it is so different from green and red.