Whistle Down the Sea

In a cubicle With the computer screen And all day,......dream I'll find a better way And all in all,.... I realize I'm dreaming,.... My life away In a cubicle With a computer screen And all day,..... dream.... Even the birds,.... sing Sweet melodies and the ocean,.... Plays Like a symphony For the wind That Whistles down The sea of change Come on, tell me what you think? Does anyone really read this stuff? If so, be as harsh as you want. Because I know if it's good or not. Perhaps people don't understand my thinking. E