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Whispers of Your Soul

Silence starts at the dead of night Bringing the hope for a new delight So we walked to the water While I told her stories of my father We lay beneath the moon that night Such things now were trite Then in an instant beyond this world of tyrants We heard words echo through the silence While still laying by the shoal We heard the whispers of our souls Speaking things we'd always thought Of which, due to time, we had forgot Thoughts that had long been dead As well as stories of the paths we had tread We heard the whispers of our souls Laying by the shoal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/11/2015 9:57:00 PM
Jacob,, congratulations on your AWESOME win, LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:37:00 PM
Thank you very much everyone I appreciate all the congratulations and the support
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations Jacob on your win with this marvelous write!
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:09:00 PM
Congratulation,Jacob, on your wonderful winning poem. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve
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Date: 1/9/2015 11:12:00 AM
Congrats on your worthy win Jacob...huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 11:01:00 AM
beautifully penned I love the imagery here many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2015 10:42:00 AM
Your muse is in the high spirit, Jacob, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/20/2014 6:32:00 PM
Beautiful. Very nice. I liked it. Meg
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Date: 12/16/2014 7:16:00 PM
Very beautiful pen Jacob! really enjoyed your poem dear friend. A 7 for you! Wish you a very Merry Christmas! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Jacob Frey
Date: 12/17/2014 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so very much Dorian, I truly appreciate the kind words as well. I wish you a very merry Christmas. Furthermore, I'm so very glad that you enjoyed this piece, thank you once again.

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