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Written: December 26, 2023, For Robert James Liguori Contest __________________________________________ Poem Inspired by Joe Bonamassa song: Cradle Rock If I were a crib, would you allow me to rock? In the soothing embrace of a lullaby talk. Do you vow to watch out for me with care? If I sway erratically through the air, If I were an anchor, I'd secure your ship. Sustaining you and not allowing you to dip. Even when it storms, I'll hold you tight. An unshakeable anchor built for the night. If I turned an atom, I'd glide through the trees. Could you view me? Could you hear my pleas? Would you be struck by the facets of life's chart? Could I potentially be inconspicuous amid my art? If my mobile phone fails yet, I am outside. Will you allow your dogs to lead me and guide? Would you save me with a howl and a growl? Do you zealously guard my desire and soul? Should I be a baby? Could you let me fall? Or will your hands wrap me and assist my crawl? Would you tenderly supervise my first step? And protect me from the chaotic misstep. If I'm a felon, will you aim for my caught? Or will you be able to set me free, fraught? With caring eyes, could you sense my pain? Allow me to gain relief by cutting this chain. If I were a tiger, would you have me in a cage? Or will you let me roam, wild and uncaged? Will you accept my chaos and my savage desire? Then will I ignite with ravenous zeal and fire? Don't let the euphoria be the sole escape. There's plenty else in life to relish and shape. Discover your purpose and your drive. And turn your ambitions and hobbies alive. Yet if you are surrounded by fumes and haze, You'll skip all the vibrant hues life displays. Explore the world as if it were a white slate. So much you may miss as you're at a fete. Will you allow me to view if I am a night light? Let your soul shine, and darkness will be bright. Offering guidance while casting a soft glow. An inspiration, no matter where you show.
  

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Date: 1/24/2024 2:01:00 PM
Congrats my friend, such a marvelous poem / Lyrics. Super talent displayed.
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Date: 1/24/2024 11:42:00 AM
I knew this one was worthy of a trophy... Congratulations Sotto...
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Date: 1/24/2024 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win well deserved dr sotto. Always good to see you win
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Date: 12/28/2023 8:00:00 AM
Whoa this is brilliant and the song you’ve chosen to do is excellent, i love the guitar and also drums, i am inspired to do this contest too. I love song prompts although iv never listened before.. you did so well. “ If I were a tiger, would you have me in a cage? Or will you let me roam, wild and uncaged?” wow what a line! That sounds so good with the melody. “ Will you allow me to view if I am a night light?” this is just beyond excellent! I am truly in awe! You did very well. BOL.
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Date: 12/27/2023 12:21:00 PM
I do not know this singer, so this is not a poetry contest for me.. I just hope this judge does not change the contest, like he seems to do a lot... your poem is excellent and it rhymes and flows so well with great imagery and use of metaphors.. I will be shocked if this does not finish first..
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 12/27/2023 4:48:00 PM
I’m not changing the contest. I like it as it is; Joe Bonamassa Poetry Contest. Yes, Sotto has a great poem. It’s definitely in the running for first… but we have a whole month left of entries to come… so we shall see.
Date: 12/27/2023 6:27:00 AM
Fabulous use of metaphors. Each stanza is a poem in its own right. Fabulous job my friend.
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Date: 12/27/2023 5:05:00 AM
dear Sotto-I sincerely enjoyed reading your poem this morning. The images were outstanding, rather unique. The questions you asked were thoughtful and thought-provoking. Your rhyme scheme was your usual stunning. An awesome creation for which I have the privilege to read. The last three lines inspired me. Have a pleasant day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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