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Whispers of Love

Whether young or old it breathes. Hearing within the heart murmurs. Intelligence rejects what it wreathes. Sense shall not detect any termers. Piercing your will, it ultimately gains. Each hint shall gather more strength. Repetitive pulse of unknown pains, Searching to reach hearts length. Our spirit, soul has no reason why. Fear may set the fire or make a sigh. Loneliness shall encourage the feeling. One may recognize mysterious reeling. Victimized, helpless of its dealing, Each step grows closer, to its revealing. written by Cecil Hickman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/25/2014 4:49:00 AM
beautiful acrostic a well deserved winner. hugs jan
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Date: 4/24/2014 11:33:00 PM
Hello there, Cecil. It's always good to see you on a winners' list. Congratulations here. Hope you are doing well.
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Date: 4/24/2014 9:29:00 AM
Very apt perspective. Congratulations on the win, cecil
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Date: 4/24/2014 8:56:00 AM
The mark of a great Acroustic is when you don't realize it is one. Fantastic job! Congrats.
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Date: 4/23/2014 11:42:00 PM
Cecil, lovely win...PD
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Date: 4/23/2014 10:32:00 PM
Wonderful rhyme and a smooth word flow. This is a lovely acrostic poem, Cecil! Congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 4/18/2014 5:50:00 AM
Well done! I like the line :fear may set the fire or make a sigh: :)
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