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Whispers of Light

Whispers of light, now silent scenes Though eyes have dimmed there is it seems An inner realm not breached by day Where memories ignite the play Remembered hues from palettes vast Inspire the views of seasons past Etched from shadows froze in time Enriched by sounds and dreams sublime Though light is now a muted muse It whispers still when thoughts enthuse Note - This is an early poem of mine that I first thought I could rhyme with a sense of cadence.

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Date: 3/12/2022 9:02:00 AM
"Light is now a muted muse..." Great. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/12/2022 3:23:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 4/9/2014 6:34:00 AM
I'm not always a fan of end rhyme, but this is a rare example of a really good rhyming poem; the word placement is just perfect, and I love that line "though light is now a muted muse" - congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 4/8/2014 5:46:00 PM
Congrats on win David; this poem could have easily placed 1st time round, enjoyed it. // paul
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David Mohn
Date: 4/8/2014 7:26:00 PM
Thanks for th kind words Paul
Date: 2/14/2014 1:42:00 PM
This is very beautiful....I think Gail will like it..good luck....
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