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Whispers of Light

Golden light pours through the portal That doorway to heaven Captivating it says come, come An angel seems to beckon Bright light surrounds bathed in its warmth The angel holds my hand Fear gone, strengthened by his presence In front of death he stands All night the portal stayed open A glowing angel stood Protecting from death the enemy Oh! That light was good Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle Contest: Whispers of Light Poet: Sara Kendrick Written this 8th day of February 2014 A form of Poulter's Measure 8,6,8,6 rhymes on the six I may have strayed from the syllable count some

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2014 5:36:00 PM

SARA, A beautiful poem and win, :) Congratulations..... XOX ~ LINDA

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2014 8:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win Sara

Donna Jones

Date: 3/26/2014 7:26:00 PM

Hi Sara...congratulations on this win.a big winner ..enjoyed reading it again...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2014 10:11:00 AM

the light within you shines, sara.. big cheers on your top win... huggs

Jayne Eggins

Date: 2/22/2014 7:28:00 AM

OoOooOo good luck with the comp Sara I and sure you will do well :) I thoroughly enjoyed the read it was beautiful much love Jayne xxx

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 2/13/2014 7:06:00 PM

Beautiful poem Sara especially the second stanza. This should do well for the contest Sara because your poem is meaningful and beautiful at the same time.

Linda Jackson

Date: 2/12/2014 3:49:00 PM

I like your poem. It has good imagery and brings comfort. Very best wishes Linda

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/11/2014 4:42:00 PM

very good poem Sara an angel protects lovely gl in contest hugs

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 2/10/2014 10:24:00 PM

Fabulous whispers !!!deary sista Sara.. enjoyed every line in your write.. thank you so much for sharing.. and you deserve the best.. Congrate for the Contest !!! :) take care.. love Sk

Tim B

Date: 2/10/2014 4:01:00 PM

Sara, those angels would surely give us the strength to face death. The powerful whispers of light shining forth from them and that doorway. Beautiful poem.

Skat A

Date: 2/10/2014 3:20:00 PM

Beautiful, Beautiful, loving the good of this poem. SKAT

Donna Jones

Date: 2/10/2014 1:59:00 PM

Hello Sara...I'm sure this one will be at the top...gave me goosebumps....

Christine Phillips

Date: 2/9/2014 6:44:00 PM

"Bright light surrounds bathed in its warmth The angel holds my hand Fear gone, strengthened by his presence In front of death he stands" That light is a signal that someone is calling. I have experienced it in my youthful stage, but it was definitely not my time yet. A nice poem Sara.

Ken Carroll

Date: 2/9/2014 3:57:00 PM

Let that love light shine!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2014 12:19:00 PM

Yes, a very good light, Sara. Sure to impress Gail!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/8/2014 5:23:00 PM

Wow, Sara, you have outdone yourself with this incredible write here! I surely enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You painted an awesome feel with the angel at the entrance of heaven, a lovely piece this one is! Great Work!!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 2/8/2014 10:55:00 AM

This is excellent Sara, I wish you gl in the contest.

Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/8/2014 10:35:00 AM

Hellooo Sara! That golden light is so compelling, that I'll walk right in through the gate,, and with the angel there with me.. yes!! A beautiful one for this contest..Winning wishes and hugs...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/8/2014 10:33:00 AM

so gloriously written with an angelic feel to it, sara.. enjoyed the whisper of your light!.. huggs!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/8/2014 8:28:00 AM

so very beautifully drawn piece lights up a beauty