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Whispers of Evil Mind

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Written: May 9th 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Opacity prevails in the chasm of my mind, A subtle maze of torture and straps behind. Hallucinations waltz within my sight flails, Whispers of delusions—weave lying tales. Lost in a world where truth fades away, Bound by madness, if sanity might sway. Creeping and crawling—archaic shards seep, In a recess of gloom—where dreams sleep. Smooth whispers reverberate, roles unseen, Taunting, slandering —and sounding obscene. I grasp onto the shards of an eroded soul, Elusive, they dodge my grasp and bear control. Is this an existence or just a heartless game? Lost in an era of chaos—ingested by shame. Aspects morph into masks of grief and despair, I'm drowning in madness, desperate for air. Paranoia icy grip tightens all around me, A world of shadows, where danger plea. I perished in a labyrinth of my proper creation, Beset by life forms—by nefarious sedation. A swirling vortex engulfs me in a thrilling haze, Lost in the winding labyrinth embrace maze. My plea for relief is ignored and hurled into air, A whisper of madness—a prayer unheard there. I'm struck with terror within the gloom, Enticed by colors large and close, loom. Reality slips from my trembling grasp, Fragmented ideas—perhaps the final clasp. Thus, lost and alone—I drift in amiss, Madness enslaves me dragging me into abyss. To grasp of insanity, to gloom I am prone, As I delve into insanity, I find an ethos to disown.

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Date: 5/12/2024 3:25:00 PM
SP, I think this poem is a great companion piece with your poem on schizophrenia. This seems to me to express the painful thoughts that people may feel....sad to imagine. We're fortunate that some medications seem to help.
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Date: 5/10/2024 6:35:00 AM
A poetic ethos in this foreboding testament of madness. Your description is terrifying but oh so real. A pundit with the guise of a linguist. A true talent my friend for bringing harsh reality to the reader in an eloquent manner.
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Date: 5/10/2024 5:00:00 AM
Very intense poetry, my friend. Evil whispers roil hearts and minds:--Is this an existence or just a heartless game? Lost in an era of chaos—ingested by shame. Aspects morph into masks of grief and despair--so well described---highly emotive write.
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Date: 5/9/2024 5:15:00 PM
The weaving of words with a clash of madness striking like cymbals that ends with a disavowal at the conclusion has swirled my mind with a tension aligned with poems by Poe. This is an excellent read.
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Date: 5/9/2024 2:37:00 PM
Your first verse captured my attention; I found your poem thoroughly engaging. Your descriptive words and phrases were powerful and captivating as was your rhyme scheme. I'm amazed at how you can write about complex issues thoroughly, poetically, and rhythmically! These lines stood out to me: Lost in a world where truth fades away, Bound by madness, if sanity might sway. Creeping and crawling—archaic shards seep, In a recess of gloom—where dreams sleep. Have a great evening, Sara
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