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Subtle desires pursue us in the void Even without mind-body, we are bound We are, by myriad reflections toyed Karmic residue continues to hound Endless, not mindless, is this divine game Cajoling us to let go of each need Soul merger with God, then our only aim As it’s voice within, we begin to heed Once we disappear, God then does appear Recognised here and now, as soft, white light Each node awakes as bliss pulsations spear Vivifying form, to our heart’s delight All that’s manifest is solely by choice Yet, piercing the veil, we can hear His voice 13-July-2022

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Date: 7/13/2022 4:26:00 PM
I believe this is our ultimate aim "Soul merger with God, then our only aim" the epitome of what we are striving to finally do, leaving ego behind.
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Date: 7/14/2022 1:27:00 AM
What is ego but separation from source?
Date: 7/13/2022 1:04:00 AM
Wonderful poem. I'm amazed that you use so many forms. I love sonnets and this is great.
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Date: 7/13/2022 2:13:00 AM
Learnt over time on PS!

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