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Whispers

Warm Breath Covers Milky skin Warming me inside Suffusing my body with joy. Every cell reaches toward you and shivers in glee. Anticipation knows no bounds as you whisper across my skin and desire ignites.

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Tim Smith

Date: 4/19/2015 7:46:00 PM

Lovely Fibonacci Jan...you made it seem effortless...Ive done one in the past Tim

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 11:06:00 PM

Thanks..I'm a math teacher so my brain likes working with numbers so se ryu tanka choka are forms I like..I also like the sweep of the fibonacci. But I must confess, this is after an edit or two...wrote it before my morning cofee so some lines had to be changed. Only second attempt so I'll probably try a few more.

Thomas Martin

Date: 4/19/2015 12:17:00 PM

Lovely!! very romantic!

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 1:55:00 PM

Thank you Thomas.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/19/2015 9:03:00 AM

This is very good with superb imagery and emotions grab you from the start and never lets go. Emile.

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 9:27:00 AM

Thanks Emile, I'm still playing with the form but like this better than the last fib.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2015 8:22:00 AM

ohhh err Janet a sultry sensual write - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 9:28:00 AM

Your. Reply went to Bev

Jan Allison
Date: 4/19/2015 8:30:00 AM

Janet you would be surprised what does get posted on here! hugs jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 8:29:00 AM

What? It was only my hand ;-) ..Lol. I have many that do not get posted to this site because of the guidlines but did not think this one was too much.