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Whispering Wings

Amethyst shades dazzle her mysteriousness hiding black secrets in vulnerable mellows though recognized in the forgotten marshes she's said to possess dark onyx powers. She smiles at lost passersby in the red valley aware of the myths bubbling beneath wet soil and they disappear in unexplored forests seemingly safer than her uncharted evil mind every full moon augments her fragrance they say her Carmen blooms to entrap innocent souls. A thousand false alarms wrapped in assumptions for they'd never know she's a trampled magnolia tattered spirits in frayed rags was all she had dried oceans of scarlet tears in enclaves of fears humanity died on a full moon night under heavy breaths her weakened screams muted with lustful arms blurred visions of a forced conviction in blood her faint shrieks died in this swamp of tragedies till her blood froze beneath slumbering snow. Her burning spirit simmered mauve mists slimy seeds sprouted the dirty green marshes spring bloomed her courage to recollect storms crushed to sprinkle colors on heavenly topanga diamonds in her mind shimmer as she laughs sending ripples of valor in perturbed oceans embracing her flaws she sings a folk melody trances of whispers blended in mellow symphony legends of crimson valley float with her flute a goddess calming oppressed souls to breathe they've heard stories of sapphires burning splashing colors of freedom and kindness but all they see on drooping moonless nights her pious caricature coming alive in dark magenta petals blooming in layered fog of storms turning mauve then scarlet glittering ruby spreading wings from green marshes perfumed flowers on elevators of courage to save scarred souls infant butterflies arise in lilac hues of whispering hopes. July 4, 2020 A Contest About a Goddess or God - Not THE God Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger ~Winner: 1st Place butter flies and marshes mellow Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann ~Premiere Contest Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 7/25/2020 5:05:00 PM
Amazing piece! Congrats on your win!;)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:30:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Brenda :) Much love!
Date: 7/25/2020 3:11:00 PM
I always admired your formats, Aditi, I failed to mentioned that beyond your mesmerizing poems my friend, and my compliments for your 1st Place win -- Aloha~@William
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:29:00 AM
I am glad you love my work William. It means a lot coming from a talented poet like you :) Thank you for your appreciation :)
Date: 7/25/2020 2:20:00 PM
Yay, a nice win too. Back to say congrats on this poem doing it again. xoxo
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:28:00 AM
Thank you for another visit to appreciate my muse Jeanne. Much love :)
Date: 7/25/2020 10:52:00 AM
Wonderful use of color, Aditi. This flows with poetic grace. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings!
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:28:00 AM
I am glad you love my muse Sam. Thank you for your appreciation. Much love :)
Date: 7/16/2020 4:51:00 PM
your imagery is so vivid aditi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:27:00 AM
Glad you loved it Jan. Thank you for your kind appreciation :)
Date: 7/16/2020 4:46:00 PM
This was an amazing read! Congrats on your 2nd place win!;)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Date: 7/16/2020 4:01:00 PM
Well done my friend--stunning write, as always. BIG congrats on your podium win. You certainly deserve the accolades, Aditi.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:26:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and appreciating my words with your kind wishes dear friend. Your uplifting comments always encourage me :)
Date: 7/16/2020 11:47:00 AM
Lovely imagery! Congratulations, Aditi!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating Kim! :)
Date: 7/16/2020 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write your pen did. Enjoy your win and day with blessings.............
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words as always Paula. Your uplifting appreciation makes me glad. Much love :)
Date: 7/16/2020 7:35:00 AM
Your story telling poem is a beauty. congrats Aditi.
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:24:00 AM
I am glad you love it Jeanne. Thank you for your appreciation :)
Date: 7/16/2020 4:42:00 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations my friend. Kind wishes, Kai
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:24:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation and for my placement in your contest Kai. Blessings :)
Date: 7/6/2020 12:27:00 PM
I echo Victor's praise below. The words seem to flow from your gifted pen... I imagine that this beauty will continue your run of #1 wins, all richly deserved. Warmest wishes, Gershon
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/7/2020 1:30:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and wishes Gershon. Honored by your visit and encouragement. God bless you :)
Date: 7/5/2020 9:42:00 AM
Aditi, your beautiful, vividly descriptive poem conveys a powerful message about how both good and evil can be wrapped in beauty. Janice
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 3:58:00 PM
I am glad you loved the message of my poem Janice. Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation. Blessings :)
Date: 7/5/2020 12:34:00 AM
Your wonderful imagination expressed in elegant letters is a pleasure to read.. As usual, you mesmerized the reader's heart..Good luck..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 1:56:00 AM
I am glad my words seemed mesmerizing to you Jenish. Thank you for your appreciation and visit. God bless you :)
Date: 7/4/2020 5:13:00 PM
Wow, this is another stunner, Aditi:-) I very rarely do this, but congratulations on your win in advance!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/5/2020 1:55:00 AM
I am really grateful for such generous words Edward. Honored by your wishes. Blessings :)

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