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Whispering To Me

And when the palm trees whisper, they’re whispering for me They surely know the secret of how I can be free Serenity, they whisper they flutter in my ear Reminding me of something perhaps, I’ve lost through fear That life is meant for living and love is all we need That simply through my thinking I’ll find that I am freed No more the anxious worry for what I can’t control Instead, allow the heavens to guide my very soul When next I hear them whisper when next I hear their song I know I’ll be contented and I will sing along

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Date: 7/13/2023 8:43:00 PM
"That life is meant for living and love is all we need That simply through my thinking I’ll find that I am freed" Love these lines. Love is all we need and also the guidance from above. Nothing else matters. Beautiful poem.Congratulations dear Mike on your well deserved POTD
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/14/2023 3:55:00 AM
I am so glad that it resonated with you Valsa! Thank you for your kind words xxoo Happy Friday!
Date: 7/11/2023 9:52:00 AM
Mike, a beautiful prayer-song of the faithful pilgrim journeying through the stages of faith. Congratulations on your POTD. I enjoyed this poem immensely. Blessings on your continued journey!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/11/2023 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Sam!!
Date: 7/11/2023 3:36:00 AM
A wonderful write, Mike. Belated Congrats on POTD! Happy to see you with the honor! Happy Tuesday, my friend. Charlie
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/11/2023 4:18:00 AM
Charlie, thank you and Happy Tuesday !!!
Date: 7/10/2023 1:55:00 PM
Mike sorry for being late to this awesome piece of yours. Big Congratulations my friend for receiving such a high Honor of POTD. Again Congratulations...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2023 5:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Michael!!
Date: 7/10/2023 10:40:00 AM
Hello Mike, Congratulations on your POTD This is also my fav. Enjoy your day my friend /Darlene\ xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/11/2023 11:43:00 AM
Helo Mike, You are welcome. Happy Tuesday. xxxx-oooo./Darlene\
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2023 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Darlene xxoo
Date: 7/10/2023 3:32:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Mike ... a beautiful poem :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2023 4:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Mike Gentile! Always a pleasure to see your georgious face, oh and the poem peaceful. May the whispers be blissful from here on out! ;D
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 7:09:00 PM
Anaya, so very sweet of you to say something so nice, thank you xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 4:49:00 PM
Such a beautiful melody to embrace, as the wind softly whispers. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Simply breathtaking, Mike. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Happy Sunday. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:26:00 PM
Brandy, thank you so much, Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 2:15:00 PM
Lovely message and wonderful flow throughout . I love Allow the heavens to guide my very soul …. Great advice for all. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs, Susan :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:27:00 PM
So kind you are, thank you so much Susan xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 12:10:00 PM
Mike--I like the structure of the poem as well as the rhythm. I especially like your message--how often I've sacrificed my serenity through my fear and thinking. Nicely done...congrats of POTD, Sara Etgen-Baker
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:27:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for your kind words xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 11:25:00 AM
Nice one Mike, really fine rhyme and flow and congrats on the POTD. Blessings,Gordon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:28:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon!!
Date: 7/9/2023 11:10:00 AM
Mike, peace of mind and soul is one of the best things. Fantastic poem. Congratulations on Your POTD. Stay Creative.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:28:00 PM
Thanks so much R. J.
Date: 7/9/2023 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations Mike on POTD! You captured the peace that nature can bring us, when one stops to listen. Please send me palms here in Central Pa. Enjoy this well deserved recognition.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Nancy xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 10:38:00 AM
Lovely write, Mike! My husband was wearing a shirt with palm trees on his shirt. The warmth of Georgia made me long for the Caribbean:) Congratulations on POTD!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:30:00 PM
I do love palm trees!!! Thank you Kim as always for your kind words xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 9:19:00 AM
Well composed verse Mike, congratulations on a well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:26:00 PM
Tom, thank you so much!!
Date: 7/9/2023 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Whispering To Me" is a lovely rhyme write. I Love It. Happy Sunday to you with your wonderful write/win...................
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula xxoo happy Sunday!
Date: 7/9/2023 8:25:00 AM
An ordinary whisper, indeed, can tell us many things. Very beautifully written poem. Each line seems precious. Congratulations!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Christuraj!!
Date: 7/9/2023 6:50:00 AM
Back to say, Congratulations on your POTD, Mike. I was hoping to see this as a POTD. Enjoy your special day, my friend. Bill
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill !!!
Date: 7/9/2023 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on poem of the day. I love the way you show what you were feeling When you wrote this and the freedom you have In the way you express yourself. Will continue to read your wonderful work . Paul white..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 6:47:00 AM
Paul that is so nice of you to say, thank you!!
Date: 7/9/2023 6:11:00 AM
Mike, a wonderful poem, All we have to do is listen.. Congratulations on POTD-again. How many times have you received this honor in 2023? Happy Sunday~ Warren
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 6:48:00 AM
Hi Warren, more than I deserve, I'm sure, thank you always for your kind words!!
Date: 7/9/2023 5:02:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Mike. Enjoy your special day today.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thank you Vijay!!!
Date: 7/9/2023 4:56:00 AM
Mike, a wonderful faith poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 5:23:00 AM
Thank you Tania xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 2:57:00 AM
Congrats on POTD! Great work :-)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 4:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Arastu!!
Date: 7/9/2023 2:09:00 AM
As Potd, I am delighted to comment again by offering my congratulations. Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 4:27:00 AM
Thank you again Lin xxoo
Date: 7/9/2023 1:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day Mike,you had me singing along.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/9/2023 4:27:00 AM
John, Thank you so much!!
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