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Whispering to heaven

Tide, gently carry my whispers Across the grey clouds that glitter With a silvery silver lining. Across the saturated linings fighting my flaming words, Beyond the vultures sailing the skies To the angels who receive them with smiles. Gab! harness my words into meaning; Let them be a symphony amidst the chaos that rings From the screams of souls locked out of heaven_ From the bottomless pits where heathens Together with my shame reside.

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Date: 2/12/2024 11:53:00 AM
Dear Constance, Your poem is a beautifully crafted piece that was fulfilling to read. The imagery of whispers carried by the tide to the angels amidst the world's chaos evokes a sense of hope and longing. Your words hold power and grace, showing a world of emotions amidst the turmoil. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt creation that speaks to the soul. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 11/22/2023 2:38:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/20/2023 8:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem!
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Constance Shandukurayi
Date: 11/22/2023 1:06:00 AM
Thank you Karen
Date: 11/20/2023 7:18:00 AM
Whispers and dirges for the lost? Interesting concept Constance
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Constance Shandukurayi
Date: 11/22/2023 1:10:00 AM
Thanks Tom

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