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Whispering Leaves

Autumn leaves whisper my name
Follow me, follow me
They dance playfully down the path

A gust of wind creates a smile
Golden leaves, kissed by the sun
Fiery orange leaves
Unraveled, undone
Resting amber leaves
Resting peacefully

Sexy, sultry, seducing
Whispering my name
Follow me, follow me
They lead me down the path
Down the path of despair
Darkness, cold, desolation

I hear laughter in the distance
Evil, eerie, deceptive
I feel a chill through my bones
To the core of my soul
The leaves have disappeared
Down the path
I can’t see them anymore

My heart is heavy
My soul is empty
The path is lonely
The leaves deceived me

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Lovely, lovely poem Noreen! It's beautiful how you've used the leaves to explore the sense of emotions. Nice!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:53:00 PM
    NOREEN, CONGRATS !! In my sisters, brokenness' contest.. xox~PD

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 7:07:00 AM
    Thanks to all for your encouraging comments and I won! That is awesome!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poen winning in ~SKAT's "Brokenness" contest Noreen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:11:00 AM
    Big congrats Noreen xx

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:05:00 AM

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 11:52:00 AM
    Wonderful reading your excellent poetry today Noreen. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 7:35:00 AM
    I really like this- well done

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:55:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Noreen. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 5:45:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poem today.