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Whispering

silently blowing in a baited breath magically i whisper in the breeze my dearest bowled over amazing beautiful far away in a starry sky the heart just missed a beat a feeling within one's breath did you just kiss my soul coming out in mist with the sweetest most beautiful words a soul of such beauty shining at the rainbows end my god never let one see those beautiful eyes tipping one's hat i smile to you if ever i did i would adore the light within the candle you hypnotize my dreams melting in the deepest embracing one;s soul one with yours beyond words the soul flies in the spirit ocean waves crashing onto the cliffs kissing you passionately tonight i dream its you

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Date: 9/24/2013 2:15:00 AM
This beautiful poem i read already..Somehow whilst rereading it I realize my comment didn t pass through...So i re write my thoughts..This is my fav of favourites..and there it goes.An ardent whisper so mesmerizing and carrying so much emotion.Excellent!
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Date: 9/20/2013 6:23:00 PM
This poem is very tender and passionate. You seem to write poetry so effortlessly! The talent you have is a dream come true! Wonderful work, Liam, I enjoyed it very much!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2013 4:42:00 AM
thank you for the wonderful comment kelly deeply appreciated
Date: 9/20/2013 7:21:00 AM
Liam, this is a beauty, especially love the ending.. :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/25/2013 4:47:00 AM
wilma thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/20/2013 6:23:00 AM
Very passionate and warm....Dreams are sometimes the only reality one can ever know...Lovely
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/20/2013 7:14:00 AM
that is quite true eileen the reason being they never came true so we keep dreaming until one finds the dream

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