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Whispered Desire

The idea tickles me far away places rose petals in the wind fantasies gallant knights on bicycles pass me by I gaze at gardens sunset my wheelchair takes me to loneliness See meme on my facebook https://www.facebook.com/aurore.severo

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Gail Debole

Date: 6/22/2022 5:46:00 PM

"my wheelchair takes me to loneliness" is the line that provides the twist to elevate this poem. Excellent.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/9/2021 11:13:00 PM

To loneliness indeed, but the mind that controls the hand that holds the pen, is full of poetic beauty. 'Don't do Facebook Aurore, but will try and find you.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/1/2021 11:37:00 AM

what unique imagery and not a white knight on a horse then Aurore, I find the ending tinged with sadness, So lovely to see you posting again:-) hugs Jan xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/1/2021 11:22:00 AM

my wheelchair takes me to loneliness Wonderful.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/29/2021 10:57:00 PM

nice that is; feel some good imagery