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Whisper Sweet Nothings'

In the cold and dark night A knock on the wood door Ended the quiet silence Baffling the cottage resident A smudged white paper Laid on the old red rug Telling the dreaded words Nobody want to hear in life Lillie opened the wrinkled paper Reading the words were written With tears running down the cheeks Wishing it was a bad dream Time passed healing the scars Preparing the heart to love again When the right gentleman appears Leaving disenchantment in the past In a rainy afternoon, love bloomed Appearing a stranger in the yard Asking Lillie for a business address Surging suddenly love at first sight For Whisper Sweet Nothings' Sponsored by Julie Rodeheaver November 13, 2017

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Date: 11/23/2017 2:34:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Nayda - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/23/2017 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Gregory.
Date: 11/19/2017 10:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nayda. Well done.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/19/2017 10:47:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 11/14/2017 3:20:00 PM
Lovely story telling... well written.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/19/2017 10:46:00 PM
Thank you SO.
Date: 11/14/2017 10:06:00 AM
Dear Nadya: I like this poem. Leon
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/14/2017 6:36:00 PM
Thank you Leon.
Date: 11/13/2017 5:13:00 PM
I'm so glad the story had a happy ending Nayda:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/14/2017 6:36:00 PM
Thank you Jan.

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