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Whisper Something Sweet

In the darkness of despair
A night lonely and haunting
Whisper something sweet in my ear
Feed my heart’s longing

Who else but you
With your breath’s magic
Can my anguish undo?
With words un-strategic

In the world burning with apathy
I seek a drop of dew
For soul exceedingly thirsty
My eye’s raindrops are few

Let calm and serenity prevail
On desolate ravished soul
In body’s mobile jail
On journey to my goal

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  1. Date: 1/20/2010 12:43:00 PM
    This is really really nice, Mohammed. I am glad I found a poet like you among my other new friends! Luv,andrea

  1. Date: 1/9/2010 12:11:00 AM
    Nice poem. I like your wring style. Good luck.

  1. Date: 1/7/2010 9:44:00 AM
    You write very well, Mohammad. Will have to read more-as time permits! I enjoy your poems-so far! Great write! Thank you for reading my poem and the kind, encouraging comments, also. Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/2/2010 7:20:00 PM
    Excellent write, sincere with love emiting from the verses.

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 11:24:00 AM
    Brother, the candle of this love poem burns into the eyes of the darkest night ... good write

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 1:56:00 AM
    Mohammad this is a wonderful poem. It is great to find other fellow Arab poets on this site. You are very talented. I can't wait to read more of your poetry :) Love, Maya.

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 10:08:00 AM
    A joy to read! love Simone

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 4:35:00 PM
    Good use of rhyme and imagery for a thought provoking poem. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 11/27/2009 5:28:00 PM
    The first two stanzas were especially inviting. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 4:53:00 AM
    Wonderful poetry you present to us today Mohammad. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 3:08:00 AM
    'Ellen's Fone and the Whisperers'