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Whisper Allouette

Whisper sweetly, dear, secrets I would hear, loving tones my worn heart craves; softly let them sing like an angel's wings gently fall and rise in praise. Hover like a dove, covering with love; nectar from the lilies bleed. Lie beside of me, feeding, tenderly, whispers to my heart's deep need. Copyright, August 31, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 9/16/2014 7:32:00 AM
Soft and beautiful, well done on your win sweetie :)
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:44:00 PM
softly let them sing like an angel's wings gently fall and rise in praise. Absolutely beautiful Faye. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:41:00 AM
soupmail.
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:39:00 AM
Faye, this one was very lovely. Picky me, I didn't like you putting "of" after beside. Other than that, I thought this was very close in meter and in all those things I was looking for: good rhyme, message, etc. Congrats in my contest. I love how you thought up an original title too!
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:00:00 AM
how smooth and romantic. Congrats! BG
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:27:00 AM
A lovely vision you have painted with your words Faye. Big congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:23:00 AM
Wonderful words n a fabulous write Faye! Huge congrats on ur win!
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Date: 9/1/2014 4:26:00 PM
Just lovely Faye...flows wonderfully
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Date: 8/31/2014 10:16:00 PM
great write. Good luck.
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Date: 8/31/2014 5:58:00 PM
a stunning Alouette Faye i am sure Andrea will love this:-) Hugs Jan xx
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