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Whisper

WHISPER I whisper to the atmosphere my universe of life nobody responds as I fall into myself I whisper to the ocean tide my cleansing sanity waves curl in on me as I drown into ice shelves I whisper to oblivion not giving in to pain never sleep or die fallen angels my farewell © Kim van Breda—11 February 2015

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Date: 5/14/2015 9:07:00 AM
- A lovely small poem, dear Kim - (Is that picture of you? .... I do not recognize you :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Van Breda
Date: 5/14/2015 9:22:00 AM
Hi Anne Lise. Thank yoi for your wonderful encouragement as always. Yes..I updated my picture to a more recent one :)
Date: 5/14/2015 5:52:00 AM
it a cute poem
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