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Whisper

It is but a whisper that can barely be heard A whisper that came when no one spoke a word The silence of a whisper riding on the wind To fall on deaf ears to never be heard again Not knowing the sound a whisper has made That whisper on the wind slowly starts to fade To listen for something that seldom is heard To hear that whisper when no one spoke a word Listening closely for that whisper on the wind To break through the silence to never be heard again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/10/2016 1:16:00 AM
merrill brownfield, awesome to see this one again. linda
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Date: 8/25/2015 11:20:00 PM
MERRILL, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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Date: 7/2/2014 2:40:00 AM
Hi Merrill, congratulations on a great write - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
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Date: 6/27/2014 5:31:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Merrill. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/24/2014 10:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:18:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Merrill :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/23/2014 11:19:00 PM
Merrill,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/23/2014 8:33:00 PM
here is me whispering a great well done on your poem. write on merrill.
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