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Whisper

floating on a log wondering where im going, hard to see land, absent in knowing. the days are shorter nights are longer the memory of u, is still fresh and new the laughter's i hear, your whispers so loud, your face i see in mist of a cloud. you've always bring me joy, not matter the times. i know your in a such better place,yet selfishness i still find. i wish to hold your hand,to lay in you arms. the feeling of needing you here, keeping me from harm. i've heard u can still see,for your watching down on me. the tears at night when i hold my pillow tight. the feel of weakness that plays a great part yet your whispers i still can hear, and as it comes so clear that frown becomes a smile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/10/2013 5:01:00 PM
Hi Carlitha, welcome to the soup and thanks for posting this great write, sorry you lost someone, blessings, Carl
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Date: 11/4/2013 3:03:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, I look forward to enjoying your verse often. Light & Love
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Date: 11/3/2013 3:23:00 PM
I hear what you are saying.... You might like "More Than A Memory." It is found in my portfolio on this site. I believe we use the same ink.... I hope you like it as much as I like yours.... Nice, poignant verse.... Love ya.... Jake
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