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Whisper

barely whisper - behind ear drum quite - nostrils flare pulse quickens - blood flows lips part softly - supple fingers test legs spread freely - dark naval dips chest rises fully - tender nipples press back springs upward - faithful head lifts well tightens - hips flex eyes glaze - mind ejects love pauses - whispers yet

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Date: 9/14/2012 11:12:00 AM
NICE!!! Love how you've separated the poem and made the parts complementary. Just lovely Ralph!
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Ralph Mason
Date: 9/14/2012 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Vicky!! Yes complementary like love. warm thoughts, Ralph
Date: 9/13/2012 10:00:00 PM
Ralph, i love the gentleness and comfort here.. enjoyed stopping by ;-) Have yourself a goodnight~ PD
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Ralph Mason
Date: 9/14/2012 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Linda. Please stop by again and I will visit your work some more soon :), warm thoughts, Ralph

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