Whisper

At night while you are sleeping, I whisper softly into your ear, I tell how much I love you, but all there is for me to fear, I say someday I'll show you, what I long for you to feel, but until that day has come, I'll whisper softly into your ear

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/19/2023 9:43:00 AM

Hopeful and gentle, and spun into so few words with so much meaning. Thank you dear poet.

Shane Thacker
Date: 6/19/2023 12:03:00 PM

Thank you, SV. When I wrote this initially, I was unhappy that it was so short, but in time I realized that it says all it needs too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2023 11:56:00 AM

- A sweet poem, Shane :) -

Shane Thacker
Date: 5/8/2023 12:33:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I am glad you enjoyed it.