Whisper

Whisper The whisper of the eternal God tiptoes in sighs Breathing inspiration to the artist and the pen, Murmurs consolation to grieving eyes, Shivers in the tamed typhoon of shame to the cheating heart, Quietly touches a fearful hand in the breath of silence, Awakening praises of devotion in new antiphons, Caresses moments of illumination, Embraces weakness with the sweet fragrance of grace, Leaves the shadow of a smile in moments of a-ha, Exhales breathless anticipation like the haunting flute, Floats with yearning to share secrets in the sanctuary of creation, Soft brush in wispy silhouettes for shadows of questions, Fluttering perpetual vow - abiding in tender vows - No cold mistral disturbs the flow of prayers and pleas, Ever restless seeks the soul’s attention in an airy gossamer kiss, Ever present guardian, Everlasting whisper of the eternal. Inspired by Whisper to Me - not entered. 6-16-20

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Jcb Brul

Date: 7/13/2020 11:16:00 PM

Nothing can beat a Divine whisper such as this dear poet Sam. Belated Congratulations..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2020 12:45:00 PM

Such beautiful lines. Congrats on your top placement!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2020 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. "Beautiful" Enjoy your win and day............

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/24/2020 11:01:00 AM

Hi Paula! Thank you for your message and your congratulations! Blessings!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/18/2020 4:16:00 PM

Wow Sam, this is fantastic! I see why it received First Place. I am in awe of your creativity my friend. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/18/2020 4:56:00 PM

Wasn't sure about it - almost didn't enter it! What do I know? Thank you for your congratulations and continuing support. I have to credit you and other friends and the contests on PS for encouragement, writing challenges and poet friends. Many times I read your work and think - why didn't I think of that? PS is an ongoing poetry symposium for me - grateful on so many levels. Blessings dear friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/18/2020 10:48:00 AM

This is a stunning write ...congrats Sam on a top win!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/18/2020 11:55:00 AM

Thank you so very much John. I am again honored by your placement. I loved this theme but it took a while for the poem to take shape. And, I almost didn't enter it! So happy that you liked it. All the best to you.

John Watt

Date: 6/16/2020 11:12:00 PM

This is another "wow" poem for me, Sam. I'm thinking of the inspiring, illuminating, empowering, comforting, awakening, advocating work of the Holy Spirit. Love the breath and wind references. The poet in me enjoys the line "Leaves the shadow of a smile in moments of a-ha." Awesome, another fav for me. Grace and peace to you, my dear friend ~ John

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/18/2020 4:47:00 PM

John, thank you! It was an amazing journey exploring the "whisper of God." I got so immersed in it that I missed the contest deadline! All things happen for a reason. Like a whisper, set free, the HS is always on the move - a living verb. We are blessed by "God's prankster! Blessings of inspiration dear friend! May the HS give you a bear hug as you take another base!