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Whisky Dust

Two glasses of whisky dipped in a cigarette smoke. The sound of ice dancing at the bottom every time we take a sip. Red rose in an empty bottle and a little note. Shine bright my star, he murmurs and grins, shine bright. He touches my hand and the cage cracks. Peel me like an egg John, help me hatch. Take me under your drafty wings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/16/2016 9:44:00 AM
Wowsa! Potent poetree indeed. Excellent illustration in few words IMHO. Enjoyed ~ john
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