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Whirlwind of September

, S _ September circles 'round us like the crisp, rustling leaves E_ Ending with a whirlwind of dwindling summer P_ Painting a palette of bold, vibrant colors, T_ Tossing and turning with the wiles of her ways… E_ Evenings arrive with a whisper of chill M_ Mist in the mornings, and rust on the hill B_ Bluer the skies, and shorter the days E_ Echoes of school bells are calling to say, R_ Rich is the bounty, of autumn’s display…. ..................................................................................................................................... In honor of Carol Brown's Contest: "Fall Is Around the Corner" (September)

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Date: 9/9/2011 3:52:00 PM
a lively little ditty! congrad's on your win! light & love
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:07:00 PM
This is lovely. The best of the best. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/8/2011 1:38:00 AM
"Mist in the mornings, and rust on the hill" loved this line. Good job! CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:23:00 PM
Carrie, what a beautiful poem and it looks so good too. I love the way you describe "rust on the hill". Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/7/2011 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,carrie
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:05:00 PM
Congrats...Sara
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Date: 9/7/2011 4:20:00 PM
So glad to see this high placement, Carrie. This IS a dynamite piece. Congrats! Smiles from Cyndi
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:05:00 PM
so lovely and deserving of top slot, carrie..… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/7/2011 1:02:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL imagery throughout your wonderful acrostic, Carrie and I love the layout as well. Awesome write! Congratulations on your first-place win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2011 12:56:00 PM
hey Carrie, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:19:00 AM
A beautul present, Carrie. Congratulations on a worthy first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:57:00 AM
congratulations on your 1st place win! a stunning write- loved everything about it!
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:51:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on first place win with this cool write for Fall luv..
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Date: 9/7/2011 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:15:00 PM
Nicely rhymed, Carrie. YOu sure formatted it wonderfully to show it off. I wonder if it's better to repeat that first letter of each line the way you do! Nice visuals.Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/2/2011 8:50:00 PM
I will not say that you should get first place because if I say you should get first place, I may jinx you... This is just fricking awesome! A Shape poem of whirlwind letters, and rust on the hill is just "MAW!" she says, kissing her fingertips! Way to go, rockstar! From Cyndi
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:46:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/2/2011 6:03:00 PM
Amazing Poetry ,nothing short of excellent.. luv Michael
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Date: 9/2/2011 5:25:00 PM
Way to go Carrie...You've written an awesome poem! I enjoyed it immensely! Good luck in the contest...should be a winner!!
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Date: 9/2/2011 4:49:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative September write..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest.....Sara
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Date: 9/2/2011 4:46:00 PM
Well how nice :-) Fancy.
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